Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Commentary #4


I really enjoyed the start of the proposal, however the beginning felt more like an introduction for your ethical argument than for your proposal argument. It needs to be more of a transition from the end of your ethical argument to your thesis of the proposal. Your thesis is a good solution for the problem you described in the ethical argument. I wish you could be a little more specific when you state that an "unbiased worldwide free media with free independent journalists" is the solution. I must say that you are specific; but because of the clarity that every thesis needs, I feel like you should add some more details. A skeptic could also doubt the effectiveness of this solution. I think most people would agree that it is hard to take bias out of journalism. And if this is worldwide, there are so many interests by different countries that it could be very challenging to take bias out of journalism. You might have to present how we will achieve that.

            One aspect that I felt lacking was the argument that supports your proposal. There were not a lot of reasons presented that you think will solve the problem. The body paragraphs talk more about historical situations where countries were being censored by their oppressive government. More than anything, the paragraphs call for a need of your solution, however they do not tell the audience anything about the effectiveness of your particular solution. For your body paragraphs, I think you should go more into detail about what it means to have an "unbiased worldwide free media". I think it would be good to go into the minute details to show how this is an alternative method to the current status of the media. Maybe give some hypothetical situations and compare how your version of the media covers it compared to today's faulty media. Maybe also talk about how we can take out the bias from news coverage.

            I think one paragraph should be included that describes other solutions than the one you presented to your ethical situation. Afterwards, you do not necessarily have to refute them, you just have to justify that your solution is the best one. By doing that you dispel some of the counterproposals that the audience might have and you show the effectiveness of your proposal.

            You have a clear problem that can be solved and I feel like your solution is a good one for this problem. I think you need to argue more on behalf of your solution and give reasons that show your solution is the best. You might have to explain how we can achieve a "unbiased worldwide media with free independent journalists". Show how this media compares to the biased media that we have today. Layout your case why you believe "unbiased worldwide media" is the best solution to your problem.



For Soudabeh Sabour

Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Proposal Argument First Draft


Tissues are the Way to Go

            The exclusion of animals in the field of scientific experimentation does not mean that advances in the field will not be blocked. Cures for human diseases, reactions to certain substances can still be discovered through experimentation by other means. The goal is to keep the momentum of science without leaving millions of innocent animals in its wake. To achieve this, the solution is to experiment on humans, whose intentions are to find cures to ailments and other diseases for their own species. However, I am not proposing that experimentation should be on live humans--too many complications would arise in that scenario. The best solution to this problem of replacing animals for advances in science is the use of human tissues.

            Experimentation on human tissues offer the best results to see how the human body would react to certain substances. There is no better way to see how a human heart would react to a chemical than by injecting that chemical into some human heart tissue. Given the uniformity in the human heart cells, how the individual tissue reacts to a chemical is a good indicator of how the entire heart would react, producing better results in medicine. The same cannot be said when it comes to experimenting on animals. Alan Dove, in his piece "The Search for Animal Alternatives, writes, "they are often poor predictors of human results. Besides interspecies differences in physiology, animal studies rely on uniform populations, virtually guaranteeing that they will miss idiosyncratic reactions". It seems nonsensical that a rat heart and human heart would react to the substance in the same way. If a rat heart reacts positively to a chemical, how does that indicate whether a human heart would react positively to the same chemical? The only way to see how a human heart reacts to a substance is to experiment on the heart. Human tissues are the best solution for that, producing better results on experiments while protecting the integrity of a fully operational heart.

            Getting better results for experiments is another incentive for large drug companies looking to minimize costs. One of the biggest costs for drug companies is research and lawsuits. Testing on human tissues is much faster than compared to testing on animals. Compared to how a liver tissue reacts to toxic levels, the same test for animals would cause drug companies " to use much more of the drug, wait a lot longer and pay for the upkeep and eventual autopsies of the animals it used" (Feder). Overtime, the cost starts to add up for these large drug companies, increasing their burden in their research costs. Human tissues, while not the only solution, are key for drug companies trying to reduce costs. Another way to reduce costs for major drug companies is to minimize payments from litigation. This can be accomplished be using human tissue as opposed to animals due to the better results they yield. Executives in the industry estimate that "as much as 25 percent of the drugs tested on animals [fail] to show side effects that later proved serious enough to prevent the drugs from being marketed" (Feder). Better results from experimentation will make it harder for consumers to sue these large companies. In the marketplace, these large drug companies are incentivized to produce the best products. It would behoove companies to lower that 25 percent number, reducing their chances of getting sued by a litigation frenzy environment. Experiments on human tissues can offer that as they lower the costs for large drug companies.

            Human tissue should be a replacement of animal use in experimentation because of the abundance of the material. Tissue does not refer to any part of the body, all tissue is a collection of cells that comprise an organ or blood. Humans have an ample amount of tissue that can be spared for the advances in science. Tissues that are experimented on frequently come in different types, including "collections of blood from healthy donors, collections of diseased tissue (especially tumors), removed during the course of diagnosis or treatment, and collections of tissue removed during postmortem examination" (Lipworth, Forsyth, Kerrige). This wide array of different tissues gives scientists different options to work with. Cancer research can become much more successful using the tissue as opposed to an animal. Seeing how eyes react to a chemical can be more effective in predicting how successful that chemical will we when it is mass produced to the human population. Another luxury is the ever-present supply of the tissue bank. In the postmortem examination, healthy tissues and diseased tissues from different organs can be extracted to fight future problems. Because of how many different types of tissue there are, they are a great replacement for animals when it comes to experimentation.

            Some may say the testing on live humans is the best solution if we are going to exclude animals. I tend to agree that live humans is a viable solution that seriously needs to be considered. However I cannot envision that point at which this makes both the researcher and the subject happy. From the researcher's perspective, it could be very difficult to find subjects where they would inject possibly deadly chemicals into one's body. Live subjects would also charge fees, something that researchers at large companies want to keep at a minimum level. If things were to go bad, the subject would likely seek a monetary reward on top of the payment to participate in the experiment. Experimentation is a risky business with many failures more than successes. Human life can be greatly affected from the inherent risk that comes with scientific research.

            To reduce that risk, human tissue is the clear answer to the problem of research on living organisms while not on animals. Because of the abundance of human tissue and the variety that it comes in, our experiments become that more accurate at a level that cannot be achieved through animal experiments. How an animal reacts to a chemical is completely different than that of a human. If we are searching for solutions to human medical problems, then the human body logically needs to be the source of the experiment, with the best solution being tissue. Science can still proceed without animals; in fact, it will take off with the use of more human tissue.  



 
Works Cited
 
Dove, Alan. "The Search for Animal Alternatives." Drug Discovery and Development 13.4           (2010): 10-13. Web. 5 August 2013
Feder, Barnaby. "Saving the Animals: New Ways to Test Products." New York Times, 12  September 2007. Web. 5 August 2013
Forseyth, Rowena, Ian Kerridge, Wendy Lipworth. "Tissue Donations to Biobank: A Review of
            Sociological Studies." Sociology of Health & Illness 33.5 (2011): 792-811. Academic         Search Premier. Web. 6 August 2013